Showing posts with label Mikayla and Sam. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Mikayla and Sam. Show all posts

Monday, March 14, 2011

Swimming Sports

We are learning to begin our recounts with a 'hook' to interest our readers.

We were all excited. People were whispering and staring. I dived into the pool and I tried my hardest to swim. I kicked my legs like a motor and it made people start to cheer.
By Evie


Unfortunately my mum was not there because she had work to do. I still had confidence in myself and I was happy.

By Mikayla

Today I was scared because I was going in the cold water. I jumped in and suddenly my heart starting beating faster.
By Sam