Saturday, July 14, 2012
Miss Rodger's Writing Group
For the last week of term our writing group got to make popcorn and eat it. Listen to Isabella M's sense poem.
Tuesday, June 12, 2012
Jump Jam
In our writing group this week we have been learning to write sense poems. Please read our poems about Jump Jam.
I can see the people puffing like a steam train as they perform more actions.
I can feel the ground shaking like an earthquake because of the booming speakers.
I can hear the music stopping and starting like a rap.
I can smell all the dust drifting into my nose.
I can taste the sweat dripping in my mouth.
By Jessica
Monday, June 11, 2012
Crocodile Descriptions
We have been learning to write descriptions for a main character in a narrative story. Read our crocodile descriptions.
Long, long ago in a bright rainforest lived a strong, violent crocodile with eyes like security cameras. She had jaws like a giant rat trap that trapped then killed her prey. Her powerful teeth were as sharp as a chainsaw cutting down a tree and she had bulging eyes. She sat camouflaged in the murky water like a rough, jagged rock. Her huge solid body could not be seen, all her body was covered except the bumps and spikes on her back.
By Kyla
A long time ago when cars weren't made yet there lived a dangerous crocodile that lived in the river Ganges. The crocodile had a spiky back, short legs and a big head.
By Kalaneti
Three centuries ago when televisions weren't invented yet, a fierce and fearless crocodile live in a tropical jungle. The jungle was an unknown island that humans had never been to in the Indian Ocean. The crocodile had razor sharp teeth more powerful than a grinder. He was uglier than Henry the 8th. He had bulging eyes and spikes on his back. His tail was sharper than a metal spike and he had pillar like legs. His body was as thick as a tree trunk, his claws harder than iron and his light green skin was as slimy as goo.
By Liam C
Tuesday, May 1, 2012
The Rugby Game
Ofa had his first game of Rugby in the holidays. Listen to how it went.
Thursday, April 12, 2012
Music with Mr Ramsay
Listen to a piece that we have been working on with Mr Ramsay over the last few weeks of Term One.
Monday, April 9, 2012
Beach Sense Poem
We have been learning to use our five senses to write poetry about the beach.
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