Crocodile Descriptions

We have been learning to write a description. A long, long time ago there lived a crocodile who was fat and greedy. She lived in a murky river. She had eyes like meatballs and her jaws were sharp like a lions. Her mouth was wide open. She had a tail that was huge and a fat body. Her claws were as sharp as a knife. Her skin was bumpy and she had short legs. By Jenny

More Thinkers Keys

Why might a jellyfish be laughing? Someone is tickling it. A clownfish is acting funny. A fish has its face stuck to the sand. An octopus is walking upside down. A starfish is dancing. A fish is trying to fly. It is having so much fun playing Shock Tag.

Thinkers Keys

Our buzz groups had to think of interesting questions to ask a whale.

Who are your enemies?
Where do you go to the toilet?
What group do you belong to?
How do you breathe?
Who is your worst predator?
What type of whale are you?
How do you squirt water from your blowhole?
Where did the name 'whale' come from?
What do people use your fat for?

More Popcorn Sense Poems

Listen to Ofa's. And Reuben's.

Miss Rodger's Writing Group

For the last week of term our writing group got to make popcorn and eat it. Listen to Isabella M's sense poem.

Jump Jam

In our writing group this week we have been learning to write sense poems. Please read our poems about Jump Jam. I can see the people puffing like a steam train as they perform more actions. I can feel the ground shaking like an earthquake because of the booming speakers. I can hear the music stopping and starting like a rap. I can smell all the dust drifting into my nose. I can taste the sweat dripping in my mouth. By Jessica

Crocodile Descriptions

We have been learning to write descriptions for a main character in a narrative story. Read our crocodile descriptions. Long, long ago in a bright rainforest lived a strong, violent crocodile with eyes like security cameras. She had jaws like a giant rat trap that trapped then killed her prey. Her powerful teeth were as sharp as a chainsaw cutting down a tree and she had bulging eyes. She sat camouflaged in the murky water like a rough, jagged rock. Her huge solid body could not be seen, all her body was covered except the bumps and spikes on her back. By Kyla A long time ago when cars weren't made yet there lived a dangerous crocodile that lived in the river Ganges. The crocodile had a spiky back, short legs and a big head. By Kalaneti Three centuries ago when televisions weren't invented yet, a fierce and fearless crocodile live in a tropical jungle. The jungle was an unknown island that humans had never been to in the Indian Ocean. The crocodile had razor sharp teeth more powerful than a grinder. He was uglier than Henry the 8th. He had bulging eyes and spikes on his back. His tail was sharper than a metal spike and he had pillar like legs. His body was as thick as a tree trunk, his claws harder than iron and his light green skin was as slimy as goo. By Liam C