We are learning to begin our recounts with a 'hook' to interest our readers.
We were all excited. People were whispering and staring. I dived into the pool and I tried my hardest to swim. I kicked my legs like a motor and it made people start to cheer.
By Evie
Unfortunately my mum was not there because she had work to do. I still had confidence in myself and I was happy.
By Mikayla
Today I was scared because I was going in the cold water. I jumped in and suddenly my heart starting beating faster.
By Sam
Hi Evie, Mikayla and Sam, thanks for sharing your 'hooks', they make me want to read the rest of your recounts about the Swimming Sports - well done.
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