Showing posts with label Joel. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Joel. Show all posts
Thursday, September 1, 2011
Sunday, June 5, 2011
Book Week Writing Activity
We had to read each sentence and decide whether we would be more likely to find the sentence at the beginning of a story or at the end of a story. What do you think?
When we had finished Miss Rodger asked us to replace one word in each sentence so they were still interesting to read.
Finally, all the noise stopped and we went back into the house.
Finally, all the fuss stopped and we went back into the house.
Joel and Dylan
We wished we had never opened that box.
We wished we had never opened that cage.
Bailey and Te Rangi
Once upon a time, there was a magical spider.
Once upon a time there was a venomous spider.
Sanha and Caiden
It seemed like there was nothing we could do to solve this problem.
It seemed like there was nothing we could do to solve this mystery.
Mere, Mikayla and Jessica
It was the best movie I had ever seen!
It was the scariest movie I had ever seen!
Reuben and Matthew
When we had finished Miss Rodger asked us to replace one word in each sentence so they were still interesting to read.
Finally, all the noise stopped and we went back into the house.
Finally, all the fuss stopped and we went back into the house.
Joel and Dylan
We wished we had never opened that box.
We wished we had never opened that cage.
Bailey and Te Rangi
Once upon a time, there was a magical spider.
Once upon a time there was a venomous spider.
Sanha and Caiden
It seemed like there was nothing we could do to solve this problem.
It seemed like there was nothing we could do to solve this mystery.
Mere, Mikayla and Jessica
It was the best movie I had ever seen!
It was the scariest movie I had ever seen!
Reuben and Matthew
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