Character Descriptions

This week in writing we have been learning to write character descriptions for a Narrative story. We had to describe the crocodile from Oban's The Monkey and the Crocodile.

One sunny morning a crocodile was prowling around. There appeared a plump monkey. He saw the crocodile's turned out toes and grip skin plus her enormous, thick tail and her dagger-like teeth.
By Jessica

One day a terrifying crocodile was swimming in the river Ganges. The crocodile had sharp teeth like a tiger. It had terrifying and googly eyes. Her tail was floppy and triangular. She became more angry and greedy as her slimy, wet body swam through the water.
By Thomas

Her drool came sliding down her scaly cheek then her mouth opened. It was an enormous mouth and you could see her pointed teeth. Her tennis ball eyes and jaws were wide open.
By Anni