Saturday, May 25, 2013

Wolf Descriptions

We have been learning to write descriptions with Mrs Smith. This is the starter she gave us. Read some of our descriptions below.

It was a dark stormy night when I left my friends house to go home.
The path through the bush was damp and stony.
As I turned a sharp corner, there to my surprise crouched a wolf!
He had ....

He had sharp pointy teeth and eyes like a yellow light. His fur was fluffy and soft and as black as the night. He looked mean and vicious.
Davin

He had teeth like a vampire and ears like cactus spikes. His fur was pitch black and as soft as a fluffy dog. There was water dripping from his mouth. His howl was so bad that it echoed for miles. My tense muscles pumped and I ran away as fast as lightning.
Leo


He had yellow eyes like torches.   His fur was as thick as a whale’s skin and patterned with grey. I thought the wolf would chase after me. It howled and howled. I shivered with fear. He gnashed his terrible teeth. I froze.
Oscar

The wolf was big and scary. Its gums were red like lava and its fur was black like shadows. The wolf growled at me. I started shaking like an earthquake and I felt faint.
Naduni




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