Hooks

We have been learning to interest our readers by writing exciting hooks for our recounts.

OMG! That is so cool. Right before my eyes was the biggest bouncy castle I had ever seen.
By Bada

As I walked through the gate I said, "Wow, that is the biggest bouncy fun castle I have ever seen in my whole life!"
By Jessica

Wow, this is so awesome and amazing, all this stuff is so cool and the food is smelling good. Holy moly, this terminator is so big!
By Daniel

It was all peaceful and quiet until I felt a big shake on my bed while I was reading a book.
By Winnie

Wow! As I took that first step through the gate I saw people running, laughing, eating, dancing and playing.
By Joyce